Broken (commish)

A commission for ~Lex-the-Pikachu, for his story Broken Steel. I was experimenting with a new-ish style. I like working in stark lines and shadows, but I also like adding color. I wasn't really happy with how I did it for the Calamity pic, so I thought I'd try it this way. I think I like this more; what do you guys think? Is it an improvement over the black and white?

's story (as well as the original black and white version of this picture) can be found in the gallery on his page. The characters, Appletart "Longshot" and raider friend, are his.
The original Fallout: Equestria can be found here: [link] , and belongs to Kkat
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro.
Fallout belongs currently to Bethesda